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I feel so alone,
But it's no wonder why.
I still wish you were here
To guide me,
To comfort me.

It feels as though we're lost without each other,
Floating endlessly in an abyss of sadness.
It's as though we were meant to be,
As though fate brought us together and tore us apart.

But I still miss you!
You can tell, can't you?
I know you feel the same way that I do
I can feel it.
I know it.

So why do you ignore me so?
When we know we are meant for each other?
Why do you act as though we are exact opposites?
As though we have not a thing in common?

Perhaps, I think, it is as I thought.
Fate brought us together.
Fate drove us apart.
We just were not meant to be,
You and I.
^.^ Just wrote it now. Feel free to comment; I'd love some feedback!
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SatsukiNekozawa Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Very well written :)
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catzrcute Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:P thanks
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Paramorefrk7 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I relate to this too. Every freaking aspect. I like your poem and the structure. Works well :D
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catzrcute Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^.^ thanks
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apriljordan Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.. I kind of relate to this. I really like it.
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catzrcute Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) thanks; I actually got it done really quickly, I didn't think it'd be so good.
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