He crept through the dark house, searching for his target. Finally, he creeps up the stairs, spotting his victim tucked away in bed. The poor fellow; he didn't even know that these would be his final moments...
He stands still for a few moments, watching the man sleep. Slowly, a sinister smile creeps up upon his face, his eyes glowing their eery red colour. He holds the sharpened wood behind his back, simply waiting. For what? Nothing; he simply savors this moment; the final moment in which his enemy of many years will be allowed to live. The final moments of his simply waiting in the shadows, waiting to once more take power over what is rightfully his. As the vampire lying in the bed rolls over to his back, the murderer's smile widens. This is the time. He raises the stake above his head, bringing it down quickly, striking through the vampire's heart. Instantly, the vampire's eyes shoot open. He knows he is not long for this world. The murderer creeps away, out of the house, away from the life he simply just took. He had finally done it. After hundreds of years of waiting and waiting, he had done it. He was successful.
So, my friend and I are RPing, and she is playing the murderer; however, she is not good at this particular thing, so I wrote the killing part for her, and this is what came out!
Battles continue throughout the centuries - good v evil. You described the killing really well although I don't know if I would call it murder. The vampire may now find peace after centuries of ill intent. A godly act perhaps. I enjoy your style and sense of darkness.
I like it